For example, recruiters tend to scan job titles and education/degrees first before diving into content.
For example, the above example summary is for a sales executive.
The quickest improvement I made to this client’s resume was to change his title to this:
Once you’ve resolved job title issues, consider how your employer names are represented.
For example, we’ve seen employer names that look like this:
* COO | John Smith Manufacturing (formerly BDT Corp in 2014 & Allis Metals in 2017) | 2013 – present
Unless the mentioning of BDT and Allis offer some importance, there’s no need to list these employers.